This week’s Trifecta 33 word writing challenge is to build upon an earlier 33 word challenge:
The original challenge was to write 33 words in which the word “lost” appears in the title but not in the story. Today’s challenge is to add 33 more words to the original story.
The Day Frieda Flerf Got Lost in a Bag of Skittles
While eating Skittles, Frieda Flerf suddenly found herself inside the bag, pinned between a red one and a yellow one. As she began gnawing her way to freedom, she heard mama calling, “Frieda!”
When Mama Flerf heard Frieda Flerf’s screams coming from the Skittles bag, she carefully lifted Frieda out, chastised her firmly, then made her clean Barbie’s entire Dream House for eating between meals again.
Linda Vernon Humor 
First, I love the pic of the Hoarder Barbie Dream House. Who knew she was a hoarder? Lol! And this story has such a good moral. Frieda should know that you never eat Skittles out of the bag! What was she thinking? Another great story, Linda. I’m still laughing!
So glad you liked it Lumdog! And I’m so impressed that you were able to come up with a moral to the Hoarder Barbie Frieda in the Skittles bag lesson! HA! Good one! 😀
funny thing about those Flerfs…
Ha! Yes indeed those Flerfs should have their own Vaudeville act!
Oh MY!!! Hehehe!!!
Sooz
Thanks for coming by Sooz! 😀
Ha – I bet she pilfered Ken’s closet under the guise of “cleaning”.
I was just thinking the same thing, EG! It’s uncanny! 😀
Frieda Flerf made me smile.
Then the pic of the hoarder bedroom horrified me. Do tell me that that is not from your house.
Haha Heylook! And all that stuff is mine . . . ALL MINE!!
Well I know now that she is neither red nor yellow…those will be the onyl ones I eat without worry from now on!
I always knew you had a kind heart braintomahawk. But I know you are a Saint! 😀
Okay…so I’m 4 years old and you’re telling me this nice story…”.buuuttttt how did Frieda get in the bag”??? What’s your answer to me? lol Diane
Hahaha! Diane! Somebody’s been spending some time with the youngsters! LOL! I can just hear my grandson now! 😀 Only he’d be nagging me for some Skittles! 😀
I did a post when my 4 year old came for a visit…and I could just hear her asking that lol Diane 😉
I am enjoying this thoroughly.
Oh thank you Ruby! It so much fun to play at the word playground! 😀
The question is: when Frieda grows up will she still find herself in the bag?
And will she seek help with her hoard-ism? Will she still play with barbies – or will she outgrow all these infantile obsessive symptoms to lead a happy and health Flerfull life style, eating Skittles and avoiding community watch shooters on the way home from 7-11’s on the streets of Florida. Now there’s something to worry about.
LOL Randy! I love the way you worry! May the Flerf in Florida be with you! 😀
This had me giggling. While Hoarders, the show, typically grosses me out, Bab’s Dream House is a riot. For the love of Skiddles, which I do, Freida either needs to be more sneaky or eat the with permission after dinner (but she did exactly what I would do…indulge in candy at will!)
Ha ha! Me too Gina! I think I’d almost be agreeable to cleaning up after Hoarder Barbie if I got to hang out in a bag of Skittles! But that’s just me . . .and you . . .so far anyway. 😀
Pic looks like my room at home when I was a teenager. 🙂
Ha! Well maybe you were aspiring to grow up to be Hoarder GI Joe. 😀
It’s almost a tongue twister, reading it aloud. Great stuff!
You know you’re right. It kind of rolls of the tongue and crashes to the floor! Frieda Flerf strikes again! 😀
I love the Hoarder Barbie Dreamhouse. But unless you combine the house with Cat Lady Barbie, it really needs Barbie scale rats.
Hey you’re right! LOL! Cat Lady Barbie! You know what I’m thinking, C.D. is that newborn baby hamsters are Barbie Scale Sized rats! Wouldn’t that be hilarious for a hamster habitat. What this world needs is humorous hamster habitats. Don’t you think?
lmfao This is great 😀
Oh thank you Draug419 and thanks for taking the time to stop by the blog! 😀