Trifecta 33 Word Writing Challenge: A New Beginning in Alphabetical Order

This weekend’s Trifecta Challenge is to write 33 words about a new beginning.

A New Beginning in Alphabetical Order

There’s no way I’m going!

Be patient, Mr. Hines.

I won’t go!

Here’s the bus. Everybody line up!  Alphabetical order!

No not me!

Yes, Mr. Hines, you’re between Mr. Himmler and Mr. Hitler.



Bus to hell is always late
“Dang! That bus to hell is always late!”

Until next time . . . I love you

47 thoughts on “Trifecta 33 Word Writing Challenge: A New Beginning in Alphabetical Order

  1. Poor Mr Hines!When THE Bus comes,one has no choice-even if you are Hitler!As usual ,very well written with a touch of dark humour-that gif just adds more sheen:-)

    • Okay fine, Lisa. But your going to miss the scheduled tour of Fresno and I hear they’ve just added a tour of Bakersfield too! Plus everybody will be singing 99 bottles of beer on the wall all the way there. You two are gonna miss out . . .

  2. This is darker than your usual! (But sinfully funny.) We all know what Hitler did…now I’m curious about what Mr. Hines did 🙂

    I thought riding the bus was Hell…it is fitting that that’s how one gets transported there. (Disclaimer: not all bus systems are bad…but the ones in Phoenix in the summer are miserable.)

    • The bus in Phoenix in the summer is probably one of the levels of hell Janna! HA! I have a feeling Mr. Hines was just in the wrong place at the wrong time (perhaps waiting for a bus in Phoenix in July?) 😀

  3. An enjoyable read. I’m with Mr. Hines – not sure this is a bus I’d want to get on to, something worrying about the other passengers.

  4. You make the writing of humour look so effortless. What a talented writer you are. I love the memorable characters you create each challenge. Mr. Hines has plenty of company on that fine list.

    • Oh Cobbie! Thank you for your kind words. Writing my blog is a party everyday for me. I’m so delighted to hear that you are enjoying it! Oh and poor Mr. Hines. But on the bright side, at least the roast to hell are paved (with good intentions)! HA!

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